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30 second copywriting tip...
game changer...
Happy tuesday mf
writing from the alps rn
between ripping Black slopes I have a minute… so…
gonna give you one copywriting tip today that will instantly make your copy better
and its retard proof… can be done in 30 seconds…
ready?
Read your copy out loud
thats it
thats the tip
"tom thats too basic"
Basic is always best bro
you know how many times ive reviewed someones sales page and its written like a fucking robot having a stroke?
sentences that make no sense
paragraphs that go on for 47 lines
words no human has ever actually said in real life
and you know why?
because they never read it out loud
when you read your copy out loud you catch everything
weird phrasing that sounds fine in your head but sounds mental when you actually say it
sentences that are too long (if you run out of breath its too fucking long)
bits that are boring as fuck (youll feel it trust me)
your copy should flow smoothly
not like youre writing a terms and conditions page for a bank
so before you send that email
before you post that landing page
before you hit publish on anything
read it out loud
feel like a dickhead doing it?
good
do it anyway
and once youve done that
(Its free)
Get after it
Tom